Thanks Freckle and Steve. First time it has been aired to a wider audience since I wrote it.
I have lost all my poems and rhymes from my PC but luckily have the originals that I printed off. I will type another up in word and copy and paste in.
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Thanks Freckle and Steve. First time it has been aired to a wider audience since I wrote it.
I have lost all my poems and rhymes from my PC but luckily have the originals that I printed off. I will type another up in word and copy and paste in.
I cross the earth in studded shoes
They leave my imprint on the ground
There’s nought but swirling fog around
The path now forks which way to choose?
It must be left so right instead
I leave new patterns as I go
The rocks and reeds force me to slow
And interrupt the tracks I tread
I know that I’ve been here before
That tree is like some dreadful beast
My compass shows that west is east
And fresh new imprints mark the floor
Not Montrail’s lugs nor Walsh’s square
But Inov8s and they are mine
They stretch in front and make a line
That mark the route of my despair
I’m trying to get from A to B
To make a true and simple curve
If I could float up to observe
Concentric circles I would see
Out on this moor I like to roam
But I could be here for a year
By then I think the mist should clear
And I could find my own way home
And then salvation from this curse
For in the mist it all comes clear
My tracks map out how I got here
Which I now follow in reverse
My footsteps are now light with air
And overlay the ones I made
But soon the rain will make them fade
As If I’d never left them there
I reach the hill down which I slide
To take me from this foggy fell
And when I’m home and all is well
My studded shoes can rot outside
Thanks Alf! - I've been watching this thread for a while and really enjoyed the poems, especially those written by our very own forumites. I had to choose a poem for our wedding and I had a crack at writing one for my speech so I've been in the "zone" recently. I wrote this one on my flight home yesterday - good way to pass a few hours! :)
That was great crowhill I really enjoyed reading it.