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Its a japanese three line non rhyming poem. Often the lines have 5-7-5 sounds or syllabols (sp?) but it doesn't have to. There's reference to the seasons and the first two lines are connected in some way whereas the third is a move away. If you use Google there's a wikihelp site highlighted, which explains far better than I can ;) I'm addicted :cool:Quote:
Originally Posted by merrylegs
Thanks mate,Quote:
Originally Posted by Derby Tup
Good to see you last Saturday in the wintry rain,
Off to another thread now;)
Hows that?
Merry, its great! And so are you :)
Nah, i'm just yer average bald headed, fellrunning, happy chappy:DQuote:
Originally Posted by Derby Tup
Singing in the rain
What a glorious feeling
I'm happy again.
Seen that before..................maybe painted on a cave wall:DQuote:
Originally Posted by Grouse
Good morning...isn't everyone getting good at haiku (myself excluded!), the BG ones are great!...here is my morning haiku....
I sip tea
leaves under galloping feet
in my mind
(looking forward to a run with other folk tonight!)
:)
not haiku, or running and more about "human" nature than the world outside but i like it....:)
your little voice
Over the wires came leaping
and i felt suddenly
dizzy
With the jostling and shouting of merry flowers
wee skipping high-heeled flames
courtesied before my eyes
or twinkling over to my side
Looked up
with impertinently exquisite faces
floating hands were laid upon me
I was whirled and tossed into delicious dancing
up
Up
with the pale important
stars and the Humorous
moon
dear...
How i was crazy how i cried when i heard
over time
and tide and death
leaping
Sweetly
your voice
ee cummings
Reached the peak,
Heart thumping, Lungs burning,
Now like Eagle fly.
Not sure if done Haiku right but here is my attempt anyway.
Bloody brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :)Quote:
Originally Posted by tri-mind