A beautiful and moving choice Einar, take care
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Stawberries by Edwin Morgan
There were never strawberries
like the ones we had
that sultry afternoon
sitting on the step
of the open french window
facing each other
your knees held in mine
the blue plates in our laps
the strawberries glistening
in the hot sunlight
we dipped them in sugar
looking at each other
not hurrying the feast
for one to come
the empty plates
laid on the stone together
with the two forks crossed
and I bent towards you
sweet in that air
in my arms
abandoned like a child
from your eager mouth
the taste of strawberries
in my memory
lean back again
let me love you
let the sun beat
on our forgetfulness
one hour of all
the heat intense
and summer lightning
on the Kilpatrick hills
let the storm wash the plates
Glad you enjoyed it Frecks - found it archived at the Guardian Saturday poems site.
Good choice Mossy and freckle didn't use the word "lush" once so I will. It was lush (I will be drinking Newcastle Brown Ale next!) :D
This is one from Fleur Adcock and I am off for a dook ;)
The Prize-Winning Poem
It will be typed, of course, and not all in capitals: it will use upper and lower case
in the normal way; and where a space is usual it will have a space.
It will probably be on white paper, or possibly blue, but almost certainly not pink.
It will not be decorated with ornamental scroll-work in coloured ink,
nor will a photograph of the poet be glued above his or her name,
and still less a snap of the poet's children frolicking in a jolly game.
The poem will not be about feeling lonely and being fifteen
and unless the occasion of the competition is a royal jubilee it will not be about the queen.
It will not be the first poem the author has written in his life
and will probably not be about the death of his daughter, son or wife
because although to write such elegies fulfils a therapeutic need
in large numbers they are deeply depressing for the judges to read.
The title will not be 'Thoughts' or 'Life' or 'I Wonder Why'
or 'The Bunny-rabbit's Birthday Party' or 'In Days of Long Gone By'.
'Tis and 'twas, o'er and e'er, and such poetical contractions will not be found
in the chosen poem. Similarly cliches will not abound:
dawn will not herald another bright new day, nor dew sparkle like diamonds in a dell,
nor trees their arms upstretch. Also the poet will be able to spell.
Large meaningless concepts will not be viewed with favour: myriad is out;
infinity is becoming suspect; aeons and galaxies are in some doubt.
Archaisms and inversions will not occur; nymphs will not their fate bemoan.
Apart from this there will be no restrictions upon the style or tone.
What is required is simply the masterpiece we'd all write if we could.
There is only one prescription for it: it's got to be good.
Fleur Adcock
I love the recent choices posted. The selection seems to get better and better. Strawberries has made me really sad, looking back at defining moments in love and the wish to revisit them and the time when all seemed possible and hopeful. Hmmm....
A friend has just given me a wonderful book of etchings by Jessica Greenman and poetry by Alice Oswald called Weeds and Wildflowers, its wonderful. Here is an extract from Snowdrop:
A pale and pining girl, head bowed, heart gnawed,
whose figure nods and shivers in a shawl
of fine white wool, has suddenly appeared
in the damp woods, as mild and mute as snowfall.
She may not last. She has no strength at all,
but she stoops and shakes as if she'd stood all night
on one bare foot, confiding with the moonlight.
Oohhhh, this is lovely DT. I'm about to go in search of some curlews on their winter feeding grounds. Just had the meeting for my museum residency project and they like my ideas for my flight of curlews through the museum. (they will be woodcut prints on japanese paper. The shapes of curlews in flight made from the patterns of the landscapes that they breed and feed on....hard to explain here!). I have a five minute recording of the curlews at pateley bridge and I hope to bring the moors into the museum. I miss the curlews here.