Hi N Dubya, good to see you again and as usual, back with a really lovely poem. I am a fan of both doodling and ammonites and really like the imagery here. I had a period where I was slightly obsessed with treble clefs and spirals too.
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I know its early on a Wednesday but I seem to have lost all concept of time and so I will ignore the poetry thread watershed.:)
Continuum
It is the cold truth
Time waits for no man
Instead it taunts us
With its incessant ticking.
And what of us?
We neither eat nor sleep,
Instead we rescue every second
From the mundanities of life
And turn each one to rapture.
Ignoring the ringing phone
Your hands slide up my back
As my fingers rake your hair.
That kiss was the time
We should have taken
To prepare our days
Instead we reclaimed enough
Of those precious minutes
To become lost again
In each other.
That's very good Hes, I'm impressed. I think you have a very strong grip on the concept of time.
Thanks Stevie. I've been thinking about time a lot lately. A friend of mine played me a recording of this the other evening and it has stayed with me ever since.
As I Walked Out One Evening
As I walked out one evening,
Walking down Bristol Street,
The crowds upon the pavement
Were fields of harvest wheat.
And down by the brimming river
I heard a lover sing
Under an arch of the railway:
'Love has no ending.
'I'll love you, dear, I'll love you
Till China and Africa meet,
And the river jumps over the mountain
And the salmon sing in the street,
'I'll love you till the ocean
Is folded and hung up to dry
And the seven stars go squawking
Like geese about the sky.
'The years shall run like rabbits,
For in my arms I hold
The Flower of the Ages,
And the first love of the world.'
But all the clocks in the city
Began to whirr and chime:
'O let not Time deceive you,
You cannot conquer Time.
'In the burrows of the Nightmare
Where Justice naked is,
Time watches from the shadow
And coughs when you would kiss.
'In headaches and in worry
Vaguely life leaks away,
And Time will have his fancy
To-morrow or to-day.
'Into many a green valley
Drifts the appalling snow;
Time breaks the threaded dances
And the diver's brilliant bow.
'O plunge your hands in water,
Plunge them in up to the wrist;
Stare, stare in the basin
And wonder what you've missed.
'The glacier knocks in the cupboard,
The desert sighs in the bed,
And the crack in the tea-cup opens
A lane to the land of the dead.
'Where the beggars raffle the banknotes
And the Giant is enchanting to Jack,
And the Lily-white Boy is a Roarer,
And Jill goes down on her back.
'O look, look in the mirror?
O look in your distress:
Life remains a blessing
Although you cannot bless.
'O stand, stand at the window
As the tears scald and start;
You shall love your crooked neighbour
With your crooked heart.'
It was late, late in the evening,
The lovers they were gone;
The clocks had ceased their chiming,
And the deep river ran on.
WH Auden
Interesting. Don't think I've read that before but parts of it seem familiar to me for some reason.
I can offer these lyrics from the Pink Floyd song "Time". Not exactly a poem but I think it will strike a chord in most people.
Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day
You fritter and waste the hours in an offhand way
Kicking around on a piece of ground in your home town
Waiting for someone or something to show you the way
Tired of lying in the sunshine
Staying home to watch the rain
And you are young and life is long
And there is time to kill today
And then one day you find
Ten years have got behind you
No one told you when to run
You missed the starting gun
And you run, and you run to catch up with the sun, but it's sinking
Racing around to come up behind you again
The sun is the same in a relative way, but you're older
Shorter of breath and one day closer to death
Every year is getting shorter
Never seem to find the time
Plans that either come to naught
Or half a page of scribbled lines
Hanging on in quiet desperation is the English way
The time is gone
The song is over
Thought I'd something more to say
Home, home again
I like to be here when I can
When I come home cold and tired
It's good to warm my bones beside the fire
Far away across the field
The tolling of the iron bell
Calls the faithful to their knees
To hear the softly spoken magic spells
Lyrics by Roger Waters
The fox was strong, he was full of running,
He could run for an hour and then be cunning,
But the cry behind him made him chill,
They were nearer now and they meant to kill.
They meant to run him until his blood
Clogged on his heart as his brush with mud,
Till his back bent up and his tongue hung flagging,
And his belly and brush were filthed from dragging.
from Reynard the Fox by John Masefield
I finally made time to have a recce of the AW this week and it was nice to familiarise myself with the route again. It was all in cloud so it was good to give it a go in those conditions and get all my mistakes out of the way. If anyone hasn't had chance to do the same they shouldn't worry though. It is straight forward enough really. I'd forgotten how long the run out is to the bottom of the first climb (don't set off too quick). I'd not remembered how Robinson flattens out at the top. I bottled it at the wrong cairn and turned off left too quick, realised my mistake, then came back to find it. Don't make the same mistake, the top is quite obvious. If you aren't sure that you are there then you aren't. Dale Head has two false summits before the actual one so be prepared for that. For the big debate for left or right of the tarn, I go right. There is grass all the way down. If it is getting craggy then head further right again. Keep your head up going over High Spy and Maiden Moor to see people ahead. There are some nice lines to be found to the right of the main path. Coming off Cat Bells keep to the right off the path and there is grass all the way down.
Don't worry if none of the above makes sense, just wing it. I hope it will be useful for someone though.
It feels like there has been loads of creativity on this thread this week, so much good stuff I can barely keep up. Great to see stevie and hanneke back with lush poems and stef i liked your recent highlander one too. Hes this is really gorgeous, it was nice to read it quickly this morning when i was at work although i was too busy to comment at the time ....:)
The best rule is knowing who to follow. Look out for Borrowdale in purple or Ambleside in green with a blue stripe, and Keswick in yellow and green.
Being slightly more technical, bearings off the summits are useful.
Off Robinson - 150 (looking for a trod way left of the fence on your right)
Off Hindscarth - 190 then 120 (obvious track though)
Off Dale Head - 100
Off High Spy - 15 for 2k then 50 (obvious tracks)
I'm really looking forward to it too.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zXHPk...eature=related
Tonight I can write the saddest lines.
Write, for example,'The night is shattered
and the blue stars shiver in the distance.'
The night wind revolves in the sky and sings.
Tonight I can write the saddest lines.
I loved her, and sometimes she loved me too.
Through nights like this one I held her in my arms
I kissed her again and again under the endless sky.
She loved me sometimes, and I loved her too.
How could one not have loved her great still eyes.
Tonight I can write the saddest lines.
To think that I do not have her. To feel that I have lost her.
To hear the immense night, still more immense without her.
And the verse falls to the soul like dew to the pasture.
What does it matter that my love could not keep her.
The night is shattered and she is not with me.
This is all. In the distance someone is singing. In the distance.
My soul is not satisfied that it has lost her.
My sight searches for her as though to go to her.
My heart looks for her, and she is not with me.
The same night whitening the same trees.
We, of that time, are no longer the same.
I no longer love her, that's certain, but how I loved her.
My voice tried to find the wind to touch her hearing.
Another's. She will be another's. Like my kisses before.
Her voide. Her bright body. Her inifinite eyes.
I no longer love her, that's certain, but maybe I love her.
Love is so short, forgetting is so long.
Because through nights like this one I held her in my arms
my sould is not satisfied that it has lost her.
Though this be the last pain that she makes me suffer
and these the last verses that I write for her.
Pablo Neruda
Sonnet - LXIX
Maybe nothingness is to be without your presence,
without you moving, slicing the noon
like a blue flower, without you walking
later through the fog and the cobbles,
without the light you carry in your hand,
golden, which maybe others will not see,
which maybe no one knew was growing
like the red beginnings of a rose.
In short, without your presence: without your coming
suddenly, incitingly, to know my life,
gust of a rosebush, wheat of wind:
since then I am because you are,
since then you are, I am, we are,
and through love I will be, you will be, we'll be.
Pablo Neruda
A word of caution - the purple vests have a joker in the pack. One very p***ed off NFR runner followed my wrong-headed line off Glaramara last year based on the same principles, and a whole legion went a-wandering on the wrong side of Green Gable at the Borrowdale last year on the same premise.
So...I suggest follow the purple by all means, except for the one that appears to be counting syllables on his fingers in preparation for an award winning finishing line haiku...or better still, learn how to use a compass, and write HHH's bearings down.
Evening all....
My little girl (age 6) lost one of her front teeth tonight and for some reason I have a sense that this is a rite of passage....I can still remember her being born in a haze of anxiety, fatigue and wonderment and me not being able to sleep for the first 24 hours, checking her constantly to see if she was breathing....I have read slyvia plaths poem many a time and not really enjoyed it but tonight i seemed to read it with different eyes.... I think there is a real gravity and authenticity to what she says here....
Morning Song
Slyvia Plath
Love set you going like a fat gold watch.
The midwife slapped your footsoles, and your bald cry
Took its place among the elements.
Our voices echo, magnifying your arrival.New statue.
In a drafty museum, your nakedness
Shadows our safety. We stand round blankly as walls.
I'm no more your mother
Than the cloud that distills a mirror to reflect its own slow
Effacement at the wind's hand.
All night your moth-breath
Flickers among the flat pink roses. I wake to listen:
A far sea moves in my ear.
One cry, and I stumble from bed, cow-heavy and flora
In my Victorian nightgown.
Your mouth opens clean as a cat's.The window square
Whitens and swallows its dull stars. And now you try
Your handful of notes;
The clear vowels rise like balloons.
Wonderful.
Just this line
Is enough for me. Everything about it. Not just a watch that will run and run given enough love, but a gold one, and a healthy fat one at that.Quote:
Love set you going like a fat gold watch
(I deleted the full stop in the quote, it was contaminating the feeling. The capital L stays.)
favourite Haystacks
home to Innominate Tarn
and Wainwright's ashes
:)
High quality haiku again from China DT. You only just flew out of the country in time before Iceland got their own back on us for siezing their bank's assets last year by setting off that volcano of theirs!
I loved the comments in the papers from people thinking that it was a complete over-reaction. Do you think they are the same people that would have criticised people for not taking enough action had a plane come down? Or is that just cynical little me? :)
Have a safe trip.
Very funny OW. I had a rather irritated man follow me once as I got a bit confused as to where the trail was and so ran directly as the crow flies through bogs, gorse and falling down holes. I think he learnt his lesson.
Thanks to HHH for his kind advice too. Very thoughtful. My compass is at the ready...
the skylark ascends
running with sun on my face
my heart is singing