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    Evening all....

    My little girl (age 6) lost one of her front teeth tonight and for some reason I have a sense that this is a rite of passage....I can still remember her being born in a haze of anxiety, fatigue and wonderment and me not being able to sleep for the first 24 hours, checking her constantly to see if she was breathing....I have read slyvia plaths poem many a time and not really enjoyed it but tonight i seemed to read it with different eyes.... I think there is a real gravity and authenticity to what she says here....

    Morning Song
    Slyvia Plath

    Love set you going like a fat gold watch.
    The midwife slapped your footsoles, and your bald cry
    Took its place among the elements.

    Our voices echo, magnifying your arrival.New statue.
    In a drafty museum, your nakedness
    Shadows our safety. We stand round blankly as walls.

    I'm no more your mother
    Than the cloud that distills a mirror to reflect its own slow
    Effacement at the wind's hand.

    All night your moth-breath
    Flickers among the flat pink roses. I wake to listen:
    A far sea moves in my ear.

    One cry, and I stumble from bed, cow-heavy and flora
    In my Victorian nightgown.
    Your mouth opens clean as a cat's.The window square

    Whitens and swallows its dull stars. And now you try
    Your handful of notes;
    The clear vowels rise like balloons.

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    Quote Originally Posted by freckle View Post
    Evening all....

    My little girl (age 6) lost one of her front teeth tonight and for some reason I have a sense that this is a rite of passage....I can still remember her being born in a haze of anxiety, fatigue and wonderment and me not being able to sleep for the first 24 hours, checking her constantly to see if she was breathing....I have read slyvia plaths poem many a time and not really enjoyed it but tonight i seemed to read it with different eyes.... I think there is a real gravity and authenticity to what she says here....

    Morning Song
    Slyvia Plath

    Love set you going like a fat gold watch.
    The midwife slapped your footsoles, and your bald cry
    Took its place among the elements.

    Our voices echo, magnifying your arrival.New statue.
    In a drafty museum, your nakedness
    Shadows our safety. We stand round blankly as walls.

    I'm no more your mother
    Than the cloud that distills a mirror to reflect its own slow
    Effacement at the wind's hand.

    All night your moth-breath
    Flickers among the flat pink roses. I wake to listen:
    A far sea moves in my ear.

    One cry, and I stumble from bed, cow-heavy and flora
    In my Victorian nightgown.
    Your mouth opens clean as a cat's.The window square

    Whitens and swallows its dull stars. And now you try
    Your handful of notes;
    The clear vowels rise like balloons.
    That's beautiful.

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    Wonderful.

    Just this line
    Love set you going like a fat gold watch
    Is enough for me. Everything about it. Not just a watch that will run and run given enough love, but a gold one, and a healthy fat one at that.

    (I deleted the full stop in the quote, it was contaminating the feeling. The capital L stays.)

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    Lovely choice Mossy!

    Quote Originally Posted by Mossdog View Post
    Sonnet - LXIX


    Maybe nothingness is to be without your presence,
    without you moving, slicing the noon
    like a blue flower, without you walking
    later through the fog and the cobbles,

    without the light you carry in your hand,
    golden, which maybe others will not see,
    which maybe no one knew was growing
    like the red beginnings of a rose.

    In short, without your presence: without your coming
    suddenly, incitingly, to know my life,
    gust of a rosebush, wheat of wind:

    since then I am because you are,
    since then you are, I am, we are,
    and through love I will be, you will be, we'll be.

    Pablo Neruda
    Poacher turned game-keeper

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    favourite Haystacks
    home to Innominate Tarn
    and Wainwright's ashes

    Poacher turned game-keeper

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    Quote Originally Posted by Derby Tup View Post
    favourite Haystacks
    home to Innominate Tarn
    and Wainwright's ashes

    lovely DT

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    Quote Originally Posted by Derby Tup View Post
    favourite Haystacks
    home to Innominate Tarn
    and Wainwright's ashes

    High quality haiku again from China DT. You only just flew out of the country in time before Iceland got their own back on us for siezing their bank's assets last year by setting off that volcano of theirs!

    I loved the comments in the papers from people thinking that it was a complete over-reaction. Do you think they are the same people that would have criticised people for not taking enough action had a plane come down? Or is that just cynical little me?

    Have a safe trip.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Old Whippet View Post
    A word of caution - the purple vests have a joker in the pack. One very p***ed off NFR runner followed my wrong-headed line off Glaramara last year based on the same principles, and a whole legion went a-wandering on the wrong side of Green Gable at the Borrowdale last year on the same premise.
    So...I suggest follow the purple by all means, except for the one that appears to be counting syllables on his fingers in preparation for an award winning finishing line haiku...or better still, learn how to use a compass, and write HHH's bearings down.
    Very funny OW. I had a rather irritated man follow me once as I got a bit confused as to where the trail was and so ran directly as the crow flies through bogs, gorse and falling down holes. I think he learnt his lesson.

    Thanks to HHH for his kind advice too. Very thoughtful. My compass is at the ready...

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    Re: Today's poet

    the skylark ascends
    running with sun on my face
    my heart is singing

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hes View Post
    the skylark ascends
    running with sun on my face
    my heart is singing
    Fantastic Hes
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