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    Seeing as its a sunny May morning with the countryside blooming all around us...........

    Spring Offensive

    Halted against the shade of a last hill,
    They fed, and, lying easy, were at ease
    And, finding comfortable chests and knees
    Carelessly slept. But many there stood still
    To face the stark, blank sky beyond the ridge,
    Knowing their feet had come to the end of the world.

    Marvelling they stood, and watched the long grass swirled
    By the May breeze, murmurous with wasp and midge,
    For though the summer oozed into their veins
    Like the injected drug for their bones' pains,
    Sharp on their souls hung the imminent line of grass,
    Fearfully flashed the sky's mysterious glass.

    Hour after hour they ponder the warm field--
    And the far valley behind, where the buttercups
    Had blessed with gold their slow boots coming up,
    Where even the little brambles would not yield,
    But clutched and clung to them like sorrowing hands;
    They breathe like trees unstirred.

    Till like a cold gust thrilled the little word
    At which each body and its soul begird
    And tighten them for battle. No alarms
    Of bugles, no high flags, no clamorous haste--
    Only a lift and flare of eyes that faced
    The sun, like a friend with whom their love is done.
    O larger shone that smile against the sun,--
    Mightier than his whose bounty these have spurned.

    So, soon they topped the hill, and raced together
    Over an open stretch of herb and heather
    Exposed. And instantly the whole sky burned
    With fury against them; and soft sudden cups
    Opened in thousands for their blood; and the green slopes
    Chasmed and steepened sheer to infinite space.

    Of them who running on that last high place
    Leapt to swift unseen bullets, or went up
    On the hot blast and fury of hell's upsurge,
    Or plunged and fell away past this world's verge,
    Some say God caught them even before they fell.

    But what say such as from existence' brink
    Ventured but drave too swift to sink.
    The few who rushed in the body to enter hell,
    And there out-fiending all its fiends and flames
    With superhuman inhumanities,
    Long-famous glories, immemorial shames--
    And crawling slowly back, have by degrees
    Regained cool peaceful air in wonder--
    Why speak they not of comrades that went under?


    Wilfred Owen

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    Oh my goodness. This is beautiful and so well written. The last part moved me to tears. Yes, so many questions when in the face of something so deep and profound and well-meant platitudes just make you want to be sick.

    Quote Originally Posted by Mossdog View Post
    i can't quite grasp


    there's this thing with time - you see
    i can't quite grasp
    too much has gone by
    yet
    somehow
    it's still like before, to me,
    like those blue-sunshine days
    nearly two decades past
    before the time of deportation

    we've moved on -
    but we haven't
    somehow
    we haven't
    i think of you, like then,
    golden, fresh, 'free',
    on the brink of womanhood
    and hope stirs,
    but then,
    it just-will-not-surge

    and i take time to question

    you, we've, changed
    fixed in our aspic lives
    part consumed - by time
    a divergence of commitments
    and yet, this thing,
    still gnaws me
    i can't quite grasp

    it slips my hold
    a plunging, gouging
    emptiness
    that's sorrow, maybe,
    and the sheer, sheer
    relentlessness
    impotent to do otherwise
    but accept
    yet it will not,
    refuses,
    to be reconciled
    maybe time will tell

    And of our time - finite
    'the time of our lives'
    look to who we give that gift
    it's precious moments
    wealthy years
    and more
    what greater measure can there be
    that absolute present
    unquestionably
    that authentic nature
    of our love
    of that which we value
    reveals to me
    sadly
    a churning dissonance
    some questions

    but reason remonstrates
    "A glass half-empty..."
    they say
    "move on"
    "best foot forward"
    "tomorrow's another day"
    - f**k their platitudes
    I want yesterday,
    all those wasted, exiled years
    I want all of you
    .

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    Quote Originally Posted by freckle View Post
    Oooooooo be still my beating heart................lovely stuff!


    ps i adore the rilke poem too
    Thanks Freckle, I do hope your little one's earache is all better today. That is a horrible pain and must be hard for you to witness. Poor little thing.x

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    I enjoyed your Owen as well Stolly. So moving and thought provoking.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mossdog View Post
    i can't quite grasp


    there's this thing with time - you see
    i can't quite grasp
    too much has gone by
    yet
    somehow
    it's still like before, to me,
    like those blue-sunshine days
    nearly two decades past
    before the time of deportation

    we've moved on -
    but we haven't
    somehow
    we haven't
    i think of you, like then,
    golden, fresh, 'free',
    on the brink of womanhood
    and hope stirs,
    but then,
    it just-will-not-surge

    and i take time to question

    you, we've, changed
    fixed in our aspic lives
    part consumed - by time
    a divergence of commitments
    and yet, this thing,
    still gnaws me
    i can't quite grasp

    it slips my hold
    a plunging, gouging
    emptiness
    that's sorrow, maybe,
    and the sheer, sheer
    relentlessness
    impotent to do otherwise
    but accept
    yet it will not,
    refuses,
    to be reconciled
    maybe time will tell

    And of our time - finite
    'the time of our lives'
    look to who we give that gift
    it's precious moments
    wealthy years
    and more
    what greater measure can there be
    that absolute present
    unquestionably
    that authentic nature
    of our love
    of that which we value
    reveals to me
    sadly
    a churning dissonance
    some questions

    but reason remonstrates
    "A glass half-empty..."
    they say
    "move on"
    "best foot forward"
    "tomorrow's another day"
    - f**k their platitudes
    I want yesterday,
    all those wasted, exiled years
    I want all of you.

    Oh this is so moving it brought a tear to my eye Mossy. I really relate to what you are saying...so poignant

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stolly View Post
    Seeing as its a sunny May morning with the countryside blooming all around us...........

    Spring Offensive

    Halted against the shade of a last hill,
    They fed, and, lying easy, were at ease
    And, finding comfortable chests and knees
    Carelessly slept. But many there stood still
    To face the stark, blank sky beyond the ridge,
    Knowing their feet had come to the end of the world.

    Marvelling they stood, and watched the long grass swirled
    By the May breeze, murmurous with wasp and midge,
    For though the summer oozed into their veins
    Like the injected drug for their bones' pains,
    Sharp on their souls hung the imminent line of grass,
    Fearfully flashed the sky's mysterious glass.

    Hour after hour they ponder the warm field--
    And the far valley behind, where the buttercups
    Had blessed with gold their slow boots coming up,
    Where even the little brambles would not yield,
    But clutched and clung to them like sorrowing hands;
    They breathe like trees unstirred.

    Till like a cold gust thrilled the little word
    At which each body and its soul begird
    And tighten them for battle. No alarms
    Of bugles, no high flags, no clamorous haste--
    Only a lift and flare of eyes that faced
    The sun, like a friend with whom their love is done.
    O larger shone that smile against the sun,--
    Mightier than his whose bounty these have spurned.

    So, soon they topped the hill, and raced together
    Over an open stretch of herb and heather
    Exposed. And instantly the whole sky burned
    With fury against them; and soft sudden cups
    Opened in thousands for their blood; and the green slopes
    Chasmed and steepened sheer to infinite space.

    Of them who running on that last high place
    Leapt to swift unseen bullets, or went up
    On the hot blast and fury of hell's upsurge,
    Or plunged and fell away past this world's verge,
    Some say God caught them even before they fell.

    But what say such as from existence' brink
    Ventured but drave too swift to sink.
    The few who rushed in the body to enter hell,
    And there out-fiending all its fiends and flames
    With superhuman inhumanities,
    Long-famous glories, immemorial shames--
    And crawling slowly back, have by degrees
    Regained cool peaceful air in wonder--
    Why speak they not of comrades that went under?


    Wilfred Owen

    I really like this Stolly, I think i have mentioned before that regeneration by pat barker is one of my fave books. Wilfred Owen is in there along woth Seigrfied Sassoon...such a painful, brutal and unnecessary time in history the 1WW.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hes View Post
    Thanks Freckle, I do hope your little one's earache is all better today. That is a horrible pain and must be hard for you to witness. Poor little thing.x

    thanks Hes she is much better thanks keep up your writing its particularly fab at the minute x

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    Well good evening all... cor blimey it ain't arf quiet on here...i'll be off soon too to watch question time, its just gotta be done at the minute hasn't it? ...well anyhow i like this poem especially that line about sinking...wish I had written it...




    The Lovers

    See how in their veins all becomes spirit:
    into each other they mature and grow.
    Like axles, their forms tremblingly orbit,
    round which it whirls, bewitching and aglow.
    Thirsters, and they receive drink,
    watchers, and see: they receive sight.
    Let them into one another sink
    so as to endure each other outright.

    Rainer Maria Rilke

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    Quote Originally Posted by freckle View Post
    Well good evening all... cor blimey it ain't arf quiet on here...i'll be off soon too to watch question time, its just gotta be done at the minute hasn't it? ...well anyhow i like this poem especially that line about sinking...wish I had written it...




    The Lovers

    See how in their veins all becomes spirit:
    into each other they mature and grow.
    Like axles, their forms tremblingly orbit,
    round which it whirls, bewitching and aglow.
    Thirsters, and they receive drink,
    watchers, and see: they receive sight.
    Let them into one another sink
    so as to endure each other outright.

    Rainer Maria Rilke
    Lush!!!!!

    Spot the woman with no tv...yes, its me. No questiontime for moi. Just listening to music and digesting my baked potato...old habits die hard!

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    I did like baked potato and cheese
    but now I have a vegan to please
    hummus and olives are great
    when combined on my plate
    but after a jacketed spud
    what shall I have for pud?

    Hey, that has to be one of my better poems?

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