another intriguing choice alf!...the poor poet...what will become of him? hope he had his mudclaws on that bleak moor...the last line is curious and made me think of another one by felix dennis.....
That’s The Truth
Felix Dennis
‘That’s the truth.’
And yet it’s not.
Part invention, part forgot,
Part embroidered by the weaver
—Memory, that warped deceiver,
Spinning, spinning in our head
Yarns of non-existent thread.
Tasselled falsehoods: ‘You were king.
’We know we were no such thing:
Fabricated recollection
Loops the truth with false perception,
Spinning, spinning joy and wrath,
On a non-existent cloth.
Last edited by freckle; 24-10-2011 at 11:47 PM.
I've enjoyed these latest poems; thanks Steve, Freckle and Alf.
Something in them reminded me of my late grandmother, so with nothing much better to do I've written a poem about her:
Granny
My grandmother ran her own nursing home
Raised three daughters to standards these days unknown
She was as strict as she was kind
Bright and stubborn; she knew her own mind
My grandfather, a soldier, fond of the dawn
Taken by cancer, before I was born
He could not be saved, so there it ended,
A loss so deep that could never be mended
She’d come to visit, travelling by train
And when we were in Cyprus she’d take the plane
That’s how I remember her, when I was small
Chatting away about everything or nothing at all!
She’d paint landscapes in watercolour and oil,
Rocks and water and skies on the boil
One of these I treasure with pride
Aphrodite’s rocks, lapped by the tide
She lived alone for many years
With a small spaniel named Suzie who had big floppy ears;
Silky black and white, Suzie loved to be touched
She was spoilt just a little, but never too much
When the fairies took Granny, we didn’t notice the deceit
A nibble of chocolate, a sip of ribena, neat;
She had a sweet tooth, and was sometimes merry
We’d tease her and ask if she’d been on the sherry
She said she’d been to the moon, didn’t you know?
It really is a marvellous place you should go!
She’s travelled the world; to the most far flung places
Met the Pope too; lots of famous names and faces
Fascinating broadcasts by the BBC
Volcanoes, icebergs; the documentary
Holiday programmes, those long haul flights
Master Chef, such culinary delights
A mind full of golden memories unreal
That really wasn’t part of the deal
Does it matter? Did she realise?
What she thought was real; she’d seen through others eyes?
It left her confused, not knowing her daughters
Reduced to a child and lacking in orders
She asked for Thomas; her love that had died
And in the end,they were reconciled
EDIT: apparently this was "clever but offensive".
Last edited by Keswick_Krumble; 25-10-2011 at 01:52 PM.
where is this kind of love to be found?.....within or outwith? or in-between?...........
Atlas
U.A.Fanthorpe
There is a kind of love called maintenance
Which stores the WD40 and knows when to use it.
Which checks the insurance, and doesn’t forget
The milkman; which remembers to plant bulbs;
Which answers letters; which knows the way
The money goes; which deals with dentists
And Road Fund Tax and meeting trains,
And postcards to the lonely; which upholds
The permanently rickety elaborate
Structures of living, which is Atlas.
And maintenance is the sensible side of love,
Which knows what time and weather are doing
To my brickwork; insulates my faulty wiring;
Laughs at my dryrotten jokes; remembers
My need for gloss and grouting; which keeps
My suspect edifice upright in air,
As Atlas did the sky.
Last edited by freckle; 25-10-2011 at 06:06 PM.
I read this poem on here the other night Alf and I loved it but was too tired to log in and say so, so I'm saying it now!I especially like the verse that you highlighted. We are in the midst of Masham Arts Festival here and on thursday it is poems and a pint night. I am going to take some of my favourite poems to read but am wondering if I have enough courage to read out one of my own (maybe I can say it was by a 'friend').