Quote Originally Posted by Lecky View Post
I didn't say comment on what I had said, I said go on and re-write it. If your version is any good, and it can be commented on here, then you may move things forward (or at least on your view). Keeping saying the same things won't help.

I suggest you take the framework that is already there and re-write as you see fit.
I have rewritten small parts and presented them here - they were not commented, by those who count, so failed to move anything forward. If those ideas were unnaceptable what is the point of my doing an entire document?
Until the problems are recognised,,neither will the solution.

How do you think wynns race is compatible as it stands?