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Thread: Today's poet

  1. #10261
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    Re: Today's poet

    Quote Originally Posted by Harry H Howgill View Post
    Sodium-bathed flurry.
    A galaxy suspended,
    below lone streetlamp.
    Excellent that Harry

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hes View Post
    This is great HHH, I can actually see the scene in my mind's eye. I always think that when you look up, snowflakes look like asteroids coming at you.
    I loved that observation Hes

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hes View Post
    Snow Dance
    by: Evelyn Scott (1893-1963)

    Black brooms of trees sweep the sky clean;
    Sweep the house fronts,
    And heave them bleak in sleep.
    High up the empty moon
    Spills her vacuity.

    I dance.
    My long black shadow
    Weaves an invisible pattern of pain.
    The snow
    Is embroidered with my happiness.
    I enjoyed the selections from DT and SA and this one is a little belter

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    Quote Originally Posted by Harry H Howgill View Post
    Sodium-bathed flurry.
    A galaxy suspended,
    below lone streetlamp.
    THere have been some excellent choices and orginal work on here of late, I am having trouble keeping up (think packing boxes etc etc)
    but I really adored this Harry, "sodium-bathed flurry" is a line I wish I had written! DT I also really enjoyed your snowy haiku, aren't the acoustics of snow just mesmerising?

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    Hope you are managing the packing ok Freckle and staying cheery.xx

    Quote Originally Posted by freckle View Post
    THere have been some excellent choices and orginal work on here of late, I am having trouble keeping up (think packing boxes etc etc)
    but I really adored this Harry, "sodium-bathed flurry" is a line I wish I had written! DT I also really enjoyed your snowy haiku, aren't the acoustics of snow just mesmerising?

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    Re: Today's poet

    the pines on the hill
    black feathers against the snow
    licked clean by the sun

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    Quote Originally Posted by freckle View Post
    THere have been some excellent choices and orginal work on here of late, I am having trouble keeping up (think packing boxes etc etc)
    but I really adored this Harry, "sodium-bathed flurry" is a line I wish I had written! DT I also really enjoyed your snowy haiku, aren't the acoustics of snow just mesmerising?
    Thanks for the comment on the haiku guys. Sometimes it just all comes together.

    Best of luck with the packing Freckle. Here's to a smooth move.

    I know what you mean about the acoustics, but try fitting the word "crump" into a poem. It doesn't always translate!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hes View Post
    the pines on the hill
    black feathers against the snow
    licked clean by the sun

    Lovely. A haiku that works even better visualised in black and white.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hes View Post
    the pines on the hill
    black feathers against the snow
    licked clean by the sun
    aw this is just gorgeous!...thanks for all the well wishes everyone, getting there (with inspiration from unexpected places!)

    renewed vigour found
    in damson legwarmers
    to power up packing!

    Harry not sure what is happening down at the Howgills but this way the crump is turning into yukky slush!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hes View Post
    the pines on the hill
    black feathers against the snow
    licked clean by the sun

    Loved that one Hes



    This is for Nero my cat:

    Silent Assassin
    Returns successful in snow.
    Leaving crimson tracks

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